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　　臨近考試，很多考生對考研英語作文的復習很是茫然。在此推出“2016考研終極寫作輔導”系列文章，從作文話題及各個段落的寫作框架兩大部分來分析，對考生在最后15天內(nèi)迅速提高寫作成績有一定幫助。

　　本文主要內(nèi)容為第二段寫作。

　　解析：第二段為整篇作文非常重要的段落，是得失分的關鍵。需要考生予以高度重視。下面介紹兩種行文思路——負向文章行文思路和正向文章行為思路。

　　一、負向文章行文思路：

　　負向文章行文思路主要是對話題的過渡、分析與數(shù)據(jù)/舉例支撐。

　　A、過渡部分：

　　方案一:

　　(現(xiàn)實中大家熱議XX話題。大家對此有不同的聲音，但我…)In reality, the subject about +N/doing sth has long been a buzz in network community, the public as well as the media. Though a variety of voices can be heard,

　　I totally oppose that+句子/ (2005年——people turn a blind eye to their aging parents)

　　I cannot agree more with you .

　　I can not oppose more against +N/I totally agree that+ 句子/ (2001愛心： love would brighten darkness/ love would cast light to the dark and brighten it. Where love would be, it will light up gloom)

　　I highly recommend that we should discourage people from doing sth (97吸煙—— discourage people, especially the youth, from smoking)

　　I can not agree more with the point that/ ( people are easily addicted to smoking and we should discourage them from doing that.)

　　方案二：

　　(圖片反映的現(xiàn)象在快速發(fā)展中國各地區(qū)屢見不鮮，因此，這值得所有人的關注)In fact, the phenomenon reflected/mirrored by the cartoon typically occurs in many parts/regions of China, which are developing with breakneck speed, therefore, so it merits special attention from all walks of life.

　　方案三：

　　(這種情況值得大家關注。我的意見是)This situation/problem deserves careful concern/close attention from all walks of life, especially our young generation. I want to give my voice to

　　encourage sb to/ support that/ advocate that (2003溫室花朵——parents should not relax the discipline in their families/ think twice about how to raise their kids.)

　　dote on sb 溺愛

　　discourage sb from doing sth/ put an end to (2003溫室花朵——doting on their kids/giving too much love to their kids.

　　)/ stop doting on their kids. /curb(限制) sth/ check(限制) sth

　　B、原因分析(2-3條原因)

　　原因分析又分為外因和內(nèi)因。

　　外因：社會、政府、媒體、家庭、學校，

　�、� 法律缺失：

　　(問題是由法律不完善造成的) The current situation is often plagued by the absence(the lack of) of relative legislation(立法) and law enforcement

　　plague n瘟疫，疾病 v困擾

　　(當?shù)卣�府沒能填補xx方面的政策漏洞)The local authorities fail to close/fix loopholes in policies concerning (network community/ water pollution/dishonesty)

　　close/fix loopholes(漏洞)

　�、� 媒體 mass media

　　(媒體對民意影響力大，媒體功能紊亂導致問題產(chǎn)生)The media has a powerful influence/impact on public opinion and a great deal of social conduct (social conduct社會行為)can be affected by the mass media. However, the dysfunction/malfunction of the media partially cause the problem that(問題) + .一句話

　　(媒體對民意影響力大，不幸的是，她的功能紊亂部分地導致問題)The mass media has great influence on public opinion via radio, TV program, magazines as well as newspapers. Unfortunately, it neglects to take that duty and therefore, leads to the problem that+一句話

　�、� 學校 college/university/school

　　business/medical/law school

　　(大學不應只提供課程，還應提供訓練去改善大學生的素質。)College, a community of undergraduates, are/is supposed to not only provide lectures and experiments to leverage their academic performance, but training as well as courses to improve their personalities.

　　(大學各團體應該發(fā)出聲音。但明顯的，他們大多數(shù)時候都是沉默的大多數(shù))Societies from college and Student Union should make their voices heard by the whole society. But evidently, they are silent/mute majority most of the time.

　　the deaf mute

　　majority 成年人

　　minority 未成年人

　　administrations/departments/authorities/institutions concerned: lack supervision; insufficient management

　�、� 家庭(父母)

　　(家長是孩子最好的老師。孩子如何面對世界取決于家長如何教育。當家長忘了告訴他們的孩子該XX，問題會發(fā)生。)Parents are children’s best mentors. How children react to the world is largely determined(決心，確定，決定) by how parents parent and educate their kids in their childhood. When parents forget to let children understand that (句子), problems would, beyond a doubt, come up/pop up忽然出現(xiàn).

　　pop-up廣告彈窗

　　pop corn

　　pop music

　　Sb is determined to do

　　Tom is determined to be a teacher.

　　Sb has made up one’s mind to do

　　I have made up my mind to get through/pass the exam.

　　(家教會影響孩子的身心發(fā)展，并部分決定了孩子是否有個好的性格。如果家長經(jīng)常在情感和身體上離開孩子，問題就出來了。)Parenting, would affect children’s mental development and physical growth， even partially determine whether he or she would have a good personality. When parents are often emotionally absent and even physically absent, problems would pop up.

　　price n價格 v定價 pricing n定價

　　parent n父母 v教育 parenting n家教

　　function n作用，功能 v起效，發(fā)揮功能

　　functioning n起效，發(fā)揮功能

　　question n問題 v質疑

　　內(nèi)因： 意識(awareness、consciousness)、心態(tài)mentality，品質性格(人性personality) etiquette禮儀、道德(morality——a slash in morality may cause crash in society)、責任感(accountability)、

　　(這種行為失當不僅是由于不知道造成的，而往往是心態(tài)不正確造成的)價值觀In most cases, this misbehavior/pressing problem/situation is not simply caused by ignorance but by a lack of awareness of / lack of a proper mentality/attitude that+ 句子

　　(公共場合大聲打手機是很失禮的)Talking loud over the phone in public places is a major breach of etiquette.

　　a major breach of principles/rules/regulations

　　(人類逃避責任時，問題就出現(xiàn)了)When individuals， as tiny part of society, skip/shrug off their responsibilities/fold their arms toward the problem/turn a blind eye to the situation, problems are bond to come up/ get pressing.

　　C、數(shù)據(jù)支撐：列舉、舉例、偽數(shù)據(jù)

　　05養(yǎng)老——A report published this year by the China Research Centre on (aging) forecasts/ indicates that over forty present of seniors spend their last years living alone

　　06自信——A survey concerning +N conducted by/ carried out by the China Research Centre on (successful people、high achiever ) shows/indicates/demonstrates/ that self-confidence is the instrument(方法，途徑) of their achievement/accomplishment/success.

　　A is the instrument of B(N/doing)

　　06追星——Opinion poll(民意調(diào)查) was conducted by the China Research Center on (也可以不寫on sth ) to test (to how much degree, people would be affected by chasing idols and nearly 70 percent of respondents admitted that they wasted too much time and money chasing stars.

　　waste time/money doing sth

　　(自身例子)One of my experiences would fully convince you that I am right. +例子

　　Facts speak louder than words. +例子/I had an experience just like the picture indicates.

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