考試吧：2014考研英語小作文優(yōu)秀范文賞析

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　第一篇

　　Dear David,

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.

　　The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.

　　Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評如下：

　　Dear David,

　　I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.

　　The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could(刪除) send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check(用詞不當(dāng)) the record and send my feedback to you.

　　Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學(xué)你好，你的作文寫的不錯(cuò)。但是要注意if從句的"主將從現(xiàn)"。

　　Dear Prof.Wong,

　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.

　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　LiMing

　　考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評如下：

　　Dear Prof.Wong,

　　I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to(刪除) complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has (刪除)prevented me from any activity.

　　To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

　　I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　LiMing

　　8分

　　同學(xué)你好，作文寫的很好，但要注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇。這是過去發(fā)生的事，因此要用過去時(shí)。

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